I will work toward Watts Tower

I met with David Thomas yesterday and we took pictures of Watts Tower. I will work toward setting an agenda.

watts tower

I have to go to Watts tower to take picture. The information is available in this wikipedia link
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Watts_Towers

And this is the picture.

Revised mine again

Angela told me my piece is distracting because fonts and logos have similar sizes. So I fixed those things accordingly and the ad came out like this.

Working toward my final piece

This is what I am working toward final.

I changed the background to black and placed brand logos on the top. And reduced the size of catch phrase and increase the size of title. I would like to get anyone's comment before finalizing.

Another roughs

As Angela told me, I have done the roughs without pictures. What I learned from the process is that I have to know what advertisement has to emphasize. As doing the ad for music store, customers may look at brands for their music instruments. Second to that, people may look for cheaper price. If I consider these factors, I would be able to produce a perfectly revised bad ad.

My 1st roughs.

I have done my first roughs and here are examples. Angela has told me to get rid of pictures and redesign the ad just with fonts instead. I better use my head to find right ones.

Expect 5 different designs.

Angela want to post some design roughs. Expect it after I come back from labor day.